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Posted on January 18, 2011.
Would you guyz help me by reading my draft and pointing out my mistakes. (8th grade reading / English)

Parkcity is an exciting place to visit. It is located in Utah Parkcity. There is a snow resort, and a small cafe downtown. Many people around the world to go snowboarding. It is a small resort town with a huge mountain of snow. Most people go for skiing and snowboarding fun. City Park is an exciting place to visit.

The first day of my cousin and I decided to go snowboarding in the resort's snowpark of the city. Once at the top we decided to race down the mountain, first to lift the tail to win. When the path joins three other way, I fell backwards and my cousin aside. After forty minutes of snowboarding in the mountains, we decided to go and rest at the inn instead of running to the elevator. When we arrived we had a change of clothes and headed for the coffee.
Due to several houses scattered throughout the mountain we had a place to sit and a room to relax. Inside the cafe was a good fire, a small bakery and a balcony with a small fire pit. As we warmed up we ate beef stew, fried and baked the lot and drank lots of hot chocolate. Later that day, we met my mother and went to dinner there with the rest of the family ate a big plate of mashed potatoes and gravy, steak, chicken noodle soup, potatoes cooked chocolate fudge ice cream and leaving us all puffed full of hearty food.
The next day visit the shop at the station of the snow we've seen pro snowboarder Marc Montoya, who had been presented as number three in the top ten in the magazine Snowboarder. Having nothing with us, but what was in store, we bought a magazine and had to sign. Now that we had everything we needed, we returned to our hotel and packed. Once we packed in our cars and drove to Salt Lake City. Arrival at the airport late we rushed in view of our luggage at the reception and met the plane to go home.
City Park is a great vacation. All ages can enjoy the activities available to them. If you plan a vacation, I think the City Park would be ideal. I think that City Park is an exciting place to visit

When the path joins three other way, I fell backwards and my cousin aside. It should be my cousin, where the road joins the other paths.Hope is help

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